There once lived a man with one little
chihuahua they were going for a walk
but then they got lost so they had to
go and find somewhere to stay. They
walked and they walked. 2 hours later….“
Finally look there is a motel across the
street” the man said as he ran across the
road. When he ran into the motel he
asked the lady if he could book a room
she said he could. It costs $100 dollars
for one room. “That's a lot for one person
don't you think.” said the man to himself.
The man paid for the room and the
manager gave him the key and escorted
him to his room. The walls were disgusting
, they had smeared food all over the wall’s
and there were dead rats in and under the
bed so he decided he wasn't going to stay
there anymore. He was going to leave in the
morning as soon as possible. The next day
they set off on their journey he then ran
into the cold morning mist with his dog who
was starving so he had decided to stop off
at a shop. But since Jaxon only had a little bit
of money left all he could buy was some chips.
Now you must remember they haven't eaten
for a really long time. Jaxon went off looking
for a job so he could make some money. There
was a guy in town who offered him a job. It
was a good offer for Jaxon. Then Jaxon said
“ok sure why not, what time do i start?” The
other guy said “you can start at 8.30 am”
Jaxon [the man] said “ok deal”. It was the
next day so Jaxon got up early and got ready.
They then sped off to his job, “oh no it's
9.00am, im late” Jaxon said then his boss
(gobuldeguk) got angry at him. “it's your first
day and you better not be late tomorrow or
there will be trouble”said (name) “ok ok boss
i promise I won't be late tomorrow” said Jaxon.
So Jaxon tried not to be late. He sprinted to
his job as fast as he could then he asked one
of the people who has been working here for
ages if there was a place he could drop his
puppy off. The man said “yes there's a place
right next to here it is a puppy care center”.
Reflection- This was hard by myself until Maya helped me with it
Question- Have you ever been on a walk and got lost?
Hi Karanui, What prompted you to write about Jaxon and his dog? I think these two maybe in for a journey full of lots of surprises. I hope they get to find a better place to live. I look forward to what will happen next.
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