Kia Ora. I am a Year 6 student in Te Kauru at Paparore School.
My blog is a collection of my work at various stages, across different curriculum areas. Throughout my time at Paparore School I may share draft copies of my work for feedback and feedforward. Other times I will share my final published pieces.
This was a bit tricky because I had to keep on changing the color's especially mars!
Have you ever made a slide show about these our solar system and when did you do it?
Good job.I liked the way you set up each slide with the Planet being the focus. Maybe you could slow your slide down so the reader can read all the information before it changes. Keep up the great work.
Good job.I liked the way you set up each slide with the Planet being the focus.
ReplyDeleteMaybe you could slow your slide down so the reader can read all the information before it changes. Keep up the great work.
Ok thank you for the advice Mrs.Stevenson I will try and remember that for future slides.
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