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Tuesday, April 21, 2020

Trapped 3


“Oh no,” Jaxon thought to himself

as he was clinging onto his little
chihuahua. Jaxon tried to find his
way out but there were no signs
of any escapes. So the only thing
he could do was to freak out.
Since he didn't know what to do
he was having thoughts about how
he would be trapped there for
days, months and even years. He
screamed and screamed but no
one heard him at all. Day after
the day they both got hungrier and
hungrier and then his chihuahua
looked around the whole place and
since the chihuahua [ which Jaxon
called bobo] Bobo could fit through
the chains from not eating for so
long he walked over to the keys
very cautiously but he nearly got
caught so Bobo hid behind a pot
plant until the police went back to
sleep. When the police went back
to sleep Bobo quickly got the keys
and ran into the cage, But before
he could get into the cage he got
caught by the other guard while the
the guard said “Got you ya little
scummbag!” as he took the dog. Jaxon
was so mad that now he thought to
himself ‘what can I do to get myself
out of this place’ next Jaxon took
all the things he could find in his
cell and tried to escape. First, he
found a hair clip on the floor which
happened to be from the lady next
door and whispered, To himself “don't
mind if I do” then he ran and took it to
the door. While trying to make all the
items he found into a key he was feeling
a bit mad because he wanted his dog
back. “FINALLY” “I DID IT!!” Jaxon
shouted as he finally made the key open
the door and escaped. Now Jaxon needs
to find his dog. Jaxon searched and
searched and finally there the poor
chihuahua was standing in the cold
waiting for Jaxon. When Jaxon got the
the dog he ran and ran until he could see another
town and he said to himself and Bobo
“I guess we will have to live here now
Bobo” Chapter 4 coming soon!!!
Reflection- This is a fun chapter book
How many chapters do u think we will be
doing? And tell me what should be in
the next chapter?


2 comments:

  1. Wow Kara, writing books now? That is so awesome to see you so motivated about writing. You have used some great descriptive words and phrases in your writing. Remember to show your audience rather than telling them what is happening. We need to feel like we are there experiencing the drama. I look forward to reading Chapter 4!

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    1. You might be able to read it as a story tonight if i get it edited and all that stuff! :)

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