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Friday, April 17, 2020

Trapped 2


CHAPTER 2 OF TRAPPED

Jaxon dropped off his puppy, then
he raced back to work, Jaxon asked
the boss ¨where do you need me
to work? the boss man said ¨right!
Over here Jaxon “ok cool” he said
so when he was stepping closer to
his workplace he was starting to
sweat a little as he is a very shy
person at times. It was Jaxonś ' first
day on the job and there were very
weird people just staring at him,
and some waving at him too. He
was terrified of how some of the workers
looked. Some looked like Godzilla
and the other one´s looked like a hairy
looking bear but Jaxon just carried on
with his job. Next it was his lunch break
¨oh no! I forgot my lunch¨ now what
am I going to eat? Maybe I could scab
someone's lunch while they aren't
looking. Jaxon said ¨ok I´ll just wait until
they have gone away. Jaxon waited for
the right opportunity then they went away
so he reached his hand into the bottom
of the bag and swiped some sandwichs
and then quickly hid it so the others
wouldn't see. On that same day, Jaxon
thought he better go around the corner to eat the sandwichs but when he looked
in the sandwichs he noticed that it had
worms in it and disgusting spiders so
then he put it back and then ran off acting
strange. Jaxon decided that he needed
to get out of there so he picked up his
puppy and then ran back to the apartment
he rented a few weeks ago. Jaxon was
very nervous about the apartment he was
in as he started hearing weird noises like
ghosts and cats and people talking he was
getting really terrified he didn't know what to
do. Suddenly the bathroom door slammed
shut then Jaxon got scared so he swiped
his puppy up and crawled under the bed
as fast as he could. Jaxon and the puppy
woke up the next day to find themselves
somewhere strange ¨oh no! Jaxon said ¨
\were in a trap¨.What are we going to do?
he said ¨were trapped¨. They tried to find
their way out but they couldn't find a single
place to get free. Chapter 3 coming soon!!!

Reflection- This was a fun story to write
about but not that easy
Question-what would you like to see
in chapter 3?

2 comments:

  1. Hi Karanui, I'm glad Jaxon found a place to leave his puppy while he worked. I'm not too sure the apartment is any better than the motel. I wonder how they will get out of the trap. Maybe they will find a clue from someone trying to help them? This could make a great pick a path story.
    Na Mrs Stevenson

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