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Friday, April 10, 2020

Supermans Dilemma!!!


Despite being an incredibly brave, strong, life–saving
phenomenon, even Superman had problems. He still
loved his job, He still loved saving lives. Today
he had already prevented many catastrophes,
flying after a jumbo jet full of passengers that had
been plummeting towards the earth at tremendous
speed. Just before lunch, Superman had swooped in
front of a moving truck to save a lost kitten. However, now
Superman needed help. He picked up his phone and began
to dial his friends but they never picked up. Then when
he tried to fly he couldnt so he thought the suit isn't
working and he ran then jumped in the air but nothing
worked so he thought to himself “If i can't fly then
what about my other super power’s” So he walked to his
workout space in his secret hide out were all his workers
were and tried his lazer eyes they worked but then they
suddenly started cutting out so then he tried super
strength and only that could work nothing else. So then
one morning when he awoke he heard alarms going off he
was terrified so then he just realised that he had hardly
powers so when he tried to fly to the Villain he fell again
so he had to run to him. He was huffing and puffing when he
got to the villain and he remembered he only had super
strength so he had to punch his legs to get unstable that was
the only plan he had. He thought to himself “ If i can’t do this
then i'm no superhero so” after one hour he finally fought the
beast and it left so he wanted to make an annocement he was
going to ask the prime minister Mrs. Llama and she said
yes he could so he went and got ready and said to
everyone their he was pretty scared befor but he thought this
was the right thing to do but the other superheroes knew that
he was making a mistake and he so they ran up and told Mrs. Llama
to stop the show and tried to figure out what happened He
told him and then all the other superheroes started howling out
with laughter he was confused then green lantern said to superman
“you need a upgrade on your suit” then he went to grab his new suit
off his workers making it when one of them said “sorry sir Your
new suit was late” Then he walked away SuperMan was so excited
he put it on staight away and he got all his super powers back and
he even got some new ones so when the next villain comes he
better wacth out for the super hero squad

This didnt take that long and it was fun because I came up with
heaps of names

Do you make stories about super hero's if you have when was
the last time you made that story?

2 comments:

  1. Kia ora Karanui. I'm so glad superman got his powers back. He's very lucky it was only an upgrade he needed.
    To make sure your writing flows make sure to check spelling, punctuation and re read to make sure your writing makes sense.
    Good job. Keep up your writing.

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    1. ok thank you for your advice i will try and remember that for next time
      Na Karanui

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