I liked when Koro kept tricking the taniwha.
Kia Ora. I am a Year 6 student in Te Kauru at Paparore School. My blog is a collection of my work at various stages, across different curriculum areas. Throughout my time at Paparore School I may share draft copies of my work for feedback and feedforward. Other times I will share my final published pieces.
Friday, November 16, 2018
Koro and the TANIWHA
WALT- Retell the story of Koro and the taniwha.
I liked when Koro kept tricking the taniwha.
Koro finally knocked all the pigeons out of their tree and quickly paddled home. Half way across the huge lake there was a line of bubbles following up behind him. ROAR!!! said the taniwha. Now I shall eat you. Koro was so scared he had no weapon to use only a paddle so bravely he put the paddle in the taniwha’s mouth.
I liked when Koro kept tricking the taniwha.
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